The Poetry Thread

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  1. Indy

    Indy Pronoun Analyst

    It's all about what you read. Shitty poetry sucks, just like shitty movies and shitty books. But the good stuff is worth reading and enjoying!
     
  2. InVolNerable

    InVolNerable Fark Master Flex

    I do what i can. You're welcome.
     
  3. Indy

    Indy Pronoun Analyst

    This one is for IP.


    Death Be Not Proud



    Death, be not proud, though some have called thee
    Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so;
    For, those, whom thou think'st, thou dost overthrow
    Die not, poor death, nor yet canst thou kill me.
    From rest and sleep, which but thy pictures be,
    Much pleasure, then from thee much more must flow;
    And soonest our best men with thee do go,
    Rest of their bones and soul's delivery.
    Thou art slave to Fate, Chance, kings, and desperate men,
    And dost with poison, war, and sickness dwell;
    And poppy or charms can make us sleep as well,
    And better then thy stroke. why swell'st thou then?
    One short sleep passed, we wake eternally,
    And death shall be no more; death, thou shalt die.


    John Donne
     
  4. BearCat204

    BearCat204 Chieftain

    WTF is this garbage
     
  5. Indy

    Indy Pronoun Analyst

    I knew it was only a matter of time...
     
  6. Tar Volon

    Tar Volon Me Blog @RockyTopTalk.com

    Never liked the light brigade. I'll throw one out for you, Indy.

    The Destruction of Sennacherib.

    The Assyrian came down like the wolf on the fold,
    And his cohorts were gleaming in purple and gold;
    And the sheen of their spears was like stars on the sea,
    When the blue wave rolls nightly on deep Galilee.

    Like the leaves of the forest when Summer is green,
    That host with their banners at sunset were seen:
    Like the leaves of the forest when Autumn hath blown,
    That host on the morrow lay withered and strown.

    For the Angel of Death spread his wings on the blast,
    And breathed in the face of the foe as he passed;
    And the eyes of the sleepers waxed deadly and chill,
    And their hearts but once heaved, and for ever grew still!

    And there lay the steed with his nostril all wide,
    But through it there rolled not the breath of his pride;
    And the foam of his gasping lay white on the turf,
    And cold as the spray of the rock-beating surf.

    And there lay the rider distorted and pale,
    With the dew on his brow, and the rust on his mail:
    And the tents were all silent, the banners alone,
    The lances unlifted, the trumpet unblown.

    And the widows of Ashur are loud in their wail,
    And the idols are broke in the temple of Baal;
    And the might of the Gentile, unsmote by the sword,
    Hath melted like snow in the glance of the Lord!


    Byron is awesome.
     
  7. InVolNerable

    InVolNerable Fark Master Flex

    I'll sing you a poem of a silly young king
    Who played with the world at the end of a string,
    But he only loved one single thing—
    And that was just a peanut-butter sandwich.

    His scepter and his royal gowns,
    His regal throne and golden crowns
    Were brown and sticky from the mounds
    And drippings from each peanut-butter sandwich.

    His subjects all were silly fools
    For he had passed a royal rule
    That all that they could learn in school
    Was how to make a peanut-butter sandwich.

    He would not eat his sovereign steak,
    He scorned his soup and kingly cake,
    And told his courtly cook to bake
    An extra-sticky peanut-butter sandwich.

    And then one day he took a bit
    And started chewing with delight,
    But found his mouth was stuck quite tight
    From that last bite of peanut-butter sandwich.

    His brother pulled, his sister pried,
    The wizard pushed, his mother cried,
    "My boy's committed suicide
    From eating his last peanut-butter sandwich!"

    The dentist came, and the royal doc.
    The royal plumber banged and knocked,
    But still those jaws stayed tightly locked.
    Oh darn that sticky peanut-butter sandwich!

    The carpenter, he tried with pliers,
    The telephone man tried with wires,
    The firemen, they tried with fire,
    But couldn't melt that peanut-butter sandwich.

    With ropes and pulleys, drills and coil,
    With steam and lubricating oil—
    For twenty years of tears and toil—
    They fought that awful peanut-butter sandwich.

    Then all his royal subjects came.
    They hooked his jaws with grapplin' chains
    And pulled both ways with might and main
    Against that stubborn peanut-butter sandwich.

    Each man and woman, girl and boy
    Put down their ploughs and pots and toys
    And pulled until kerack! Oh, joy—
    They broke right through that peanut-butter sandwhcih

    A puff of dust, a screech, a squeak—
    The king's jaw opened with a creak.
    And then in voice so faint and weak—
    The first words that they heard him speak
    Were, "How about a peanut-butter sandwich?"

    - Shel Silverstein
     
  8. lylsmorr

    lylsmorr Super Moderator

    Not a huge fan of poetry but I like Invictus by William Earnest Hensley

    Out of the night that covers me,
    Black as the Pit from pole to pole,
    I thank whatever gods may be
    For my unconquerable soul.

    In the fell clutch of circumstance
    I have not winced nor cried aloud.
    Under the bludgeonings of chance
    My head is bloody, but unbowed.

    Beyond this place of wrath and tears
    Looms but the Horror of the shade,
    And yet the menace of the years
    Finds, and shall find, me unafraid.

    It matters not how strait the gate,
    How charged with punishments the scroll.
    I am the master of my fate:
    I am the captain of my soul.
     
  9. Indy

    Indy Pronoun Analyst

    Gotta read this one out loud to get the full effect. I like it a lot! Thanks for sharing
     
  10. Indy

    Indy Pronoun Analyst

    Hadn't read this one before, lyls, but it's nice. Looking at that dude's situation makes me feel bad about some of the stuff I take for granted in my life!
     
  11. Indy

    Indy Pronoun Analyst

    This guy came to Wabash tonight to perform some of his poems. He was fantastic. This one was amazing. Watch it.

    [video=youtube;Qnl_zG2KwR0]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qnl_zG2KwR0[/video]

    “WHAT’S GENOCIDE?” by Carlos Andres Gomez

    their high school principal
    told me I couldn’t teach
    poetry with profanity
    so I asked my students,
    “Raise your hand if you’ve heard of the Holocaust.”
    in unison, their arms rose up like poisonous gas
    then straightened out like an SS infantry
    “Okay. Please put your hands down.
    Now raise your hand if you’ve heard of the Rwandan genocide.”
    blank stares mixed with curious ignorance
    a quivering hand out of the crowd
    half-way raised, like a lone survivor
    struggling to stand up in Kigali
    “Luz, are you sure about that?”
    “No.”
    “That’s what I thought.”

    “Carlos—what’s genocide?”

    they won’t let you hear the truth at school
    if that person says “****”
    can’t even talk about “****”
    even though a third of your senior class
    is pregnant.

    I can’t teach an 18-year-old girl in a public school
    how to use a condom that will save her life
    and that of the orphan she will be forced
    to give to the foster care system—
    “Carlos, how many 13-year-olds do you know that are HIV-positive?”

    “Honestly, none. But I do visit a shelter every Monday and talk with
    six 12-year-old girls with diagnosed AIDS.”
    while 4th graders three blocks away give little boys *******s during recess
    I met an 11-year-old gang member in the Bronx who carries
    a semi-automatic weapon to study hall so he can make it home
    and you want me to censor my language

    “Carlos, what’s genocide?”

    your books leave out Emmett Till and Medgar Evers
    call themselves “World History” and don’t mention
    King Leopold or diamond mines
    call themselves “Politics in the Modern World”
    and don’t mention Apartheid

    “Carlos, what’s genocide?”

    you wonder why children hide in adult bodies
    lie under light-color-eyed contact lenses
    learn to fetishize the size of their asses
    and simultaneously hate their lips
    my students thought Che Guevara was a rapper
    from East Harlem
    still think my Mumia t-shirt is of Bob Marley
    how can literacy not include Phyllis Wheatley?
    schools were built in the shadows of ghosts
    filtered through incest and grinding teeth
    molded under veils of extravagant ritual

    “Carlos, what’s genocide?”

    “Roselyn, how old was she? Cuántos años tuvo tu madre cuando se murió?”

    “My mother had 32 years when she died. Ella era bellísima.”

    …what’s genocide?

    they’ve moved from sterilizing “Boriqua” women
    injecting indigenous sisters with Hepatitis B,
    now they just kill mothers with silent poison
    stain their loyalty and love into veins and suffocate them

    …what’s genocide?

    Ridwan’s father hung himself
    in the box because he thought his son
    was ashamed of him

    …what’s genocide?

    Maureen’s mother gave her
    skin lightening cream
    the day before she started the 6th grade

    …what’s genocide?

    she carves straight lines into her
    beautiful brown thighs so she can remember
    what it feels like to heal

    …what’s genocide?
    …what’s genocide?

    “Carlos, what’s genocide?”

    “Luz, this…
    this right here…

    is genocide.”

    –from Rattle #27, Summer 2007
    Tribute to Slam Poetry
     
  12. InVolNerable

    InVolNerable Fark Master Flex

    Indy, quit being gay.
     
  13. JayVols

    JayVols Walleye Catchin' Moderator

    Lyrical poetry:

    [youtube]AQVWafE1HPI[/youtube]
     
    Last edited: Sep 22, 2012
  14. Indy

    Indy Pronoun Analyst

    Loving this guy's poetry. He is really good. Take a minute to listen and read it!

    [video=youtube;Q2sQSoA3BTg]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q2sQSoA3BTg[/video]

    “Never again”

    by Carlos Andrés Gómez

    Her face now a splattered Pollock of broken

    teeth, infant fossil smeared through the belly

    of a hollow bottle blues tune, he gathers himself

    up and with every earnest fiber in his body, looks

    his freshly battered wife, the love of his life, in the

    eyes, and says,

    I’m so sorry, baby. I didn’t mean to do that. I swear,

    it will never happen again.

    It’s only human, right? Like checks we can’t cash

    and children we can’t raise: words without end.

    Bigger than the gushing glass of time we obsess over,

    our collected lineages like a speck of dust swallowed

    by a tidal wave.

    We say forever & forget in four days, say never and

    forget in 49 years or four months.

    A room full of 7th graders had never heard the word Rwanda.

    A room of adults, less than 3 years removed, couldn’t remember

    the date of Hurricane Katrina.

    For all the good intentions overflowing our fragile guts, we

    have to spoil it with over-swollen, over-trying words like

    forever, like never or ever,

    like, I’d never say never, but I couldn’t really ever see myself

    marrying a black girl,

    or, I would never steal anything…even if I was starving,

    and, of course, I will love you, forever.

    So we get matching tattoos: to prove Forever.

    As if these fragile vessels we wear will harbor us

    forever, regardless of religious belief

    after the Holocaust they said, Never again.

    And then French banks fronted money for 580,000

    smuggled machetes from Uganda to Rwanda and turned

    countrysides into gaping canyons of misplaced crimson-tinged

    limbs, after which they said, Never again.

    The blood still damp, a boiling cauldron of the same brand

    just across the border in the Congo, haunting ghosts on horseback

    in Sudan, and bystanders have the nerve to say Never again.

    Bill Clinton had never

    been there

    until he went. 4 years too late to hear the wind’s stolen

    secrets, the crushed whispers from the mangled pews of Nyamata

    Church where a pastor gave up his entire congregation of 2,000 to

    butchers who hacked them up like slaughterhouse poultry while

    they kneeled to pray, and our former president had the nerve to

    brand words into that guilt-ridden Witness Book like I did, pages

    upon pages of the same scarred-up phrase stacked one atop

    the other like a freshly open grave:

    Never again.

    Never again.

    Never again.

    How dare white people sob at a memorial they built?

    Damp tissues falling out of their pockets like blood money, a French

    diplomat hugs his wife in the Children’s Sanctuary of the Kigali Memorial, I

    look beyond them to the wall-sized photo of a child:

    Ariane

    Age: 4

    Favourite food: Cake

    Enjoyed: Singing and dancing

    Cause of death: Stabbed in her eyes and head

    Irene and Uwamwezi

    Ages: 6 and 7

    Relationship: Sisters

    Favourite toy: A doll they shared

    Cause of death: A grenade thrown in their shower

    Nadia

    Age: 8

    Favourite sport: Jogging with her father

    Favourite song: “My Native Land Which God Chose for me”

    Cause of death: Hacked by machete

    David

    Age: 10

    Dream: Becoming a doctor

    Last word: ‘UNAMIR will come for us.”

    Cause of death: Tortured to death

    I hear that sobbing French couple tremble to

    make sense of what they stayed silent on, their

    arms clumsily entangled & all I can think of is those

    two Tutsi sisters hand-cuffed to each other and drowned

    in the septic tank behind their Aunt’s house.

    I don’t have enough intelligence or hope or enough

    empathy in these stupid bones propping me up

    to call what I’m feeling pain or sadness or even

    anger

    because the so-called devils in Rwanda look like my boys

    from high school and the shy woman at the church with

    a machete scar draping half her neck reminds me of my ex-

    girlfriend and the sobbing French diplomat reminds me of

    myself.

    I spilled an entire drink, a vodka-cranberry

    down a Rwandese man’s brand new white

    shirt at a night club & he looked at me, with

    a big reassuring smile and said,

    “No, no…it is okay, my brother. There are bigger things.

    A shirt is just a shirt. I can easily get another one

    of those.”
     
  15. Bassmanbruno

    Bassmanbruno Banned

    There swims the Sperm whale
    Mouth wide open in the sea
    Eating what may come along
    Fish and trash and things.

    -bmb
     
  16. Indy

    Indy Pronoun Analyst

    [video=youtube;cKMhp7hpYIs]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cKMhp7hpYIs[/video]
     
  17. Indy

    Indy Pronoun Analyst

    Just wrote a 14 page analysis of this poem for a final paper.

    Diving into the Wreck, by Adrienne Rich

    First having read the book of myths,
    and loaded the camera,
    and checked the edge of the knife-blade,
    I put on
    the body-armor of black rubber
    the absurd flippers
    the grave and awkward mask.
    I am having to do this
    not like Cousteau with his
    assiduous team
    aboard the sun-flooded schooner
    but here alone.

    There is a ladder.
    The ladder is always there
    hanging innocently
    close to the side of the schooner.
    We know what it is for,
    we who have used it.
    Otherwise
    it is a piece of maritime floss
    some sundry equipment.

    I go down.
    Rung after rung and still
    the oxygen immerses me
    the blue light
    the clear atoms
    of our human air.
    I go down.
    My flippers cripple me,
    I crawl like an insect down the ladder
    and there is no one
    to tell me when the ocean
    will begin.

    First the air is blue and then
    it is bluer and then green and then
    black I am blacking out and yet
    my mask is powerful
    it pumps my blood with power
    the sea is another story
    the sea is not a question of power
    I have to learn alone
    to turn my body without force
    in the deep element.

    And now: it is easy to forget
    what I came for
    among so many who have always
    lived here
    swaying their crenellated fans
    between the reefs
    and besides
    you breathe differently down here.

    I came to explore the wreck.
    The words are purposes.
    The words are maps.
    I came to see the damage that was done
    and the treasures that prevail.
    I stroke the beam of my lamp
    slowly along the flank
    of something more permanent
    than fish or weed

    the thing I came for:
    the wreck and not the story of the wreck
    the thing itself and not the myth
    the drowned face always staring
    toward the sun
    the evidence of damage
    worn by salt and sway into this threadbare beauty
    the ribs of the disaster
    curving their assertion
    among the tentative haunters.

    This is the place.
    And I am here, the mermaid whose dark hair
    streams black, the merman in his armored body.
    We circle silently
    about the wreck
    we dive into the hold.
    I am she: I am he

    whose drowned face sleeps with open eyes
    whose breasts still bear the stress
    whose silver, copper, vermeil cargo lies
    obscurely inside barrels
    half-wedged and left to rot
    we are the half-destroyed instruments
    that once held to a course
    the water-eaten log
    the fouled compass

    We are, I am, you are
    by cowardice or courage
    the one who find our way
    back to this scene
    carrying a knife, a camera
    a book of myths
    in which
    our names do not appear.
     
  18. InVolNerable

    InVolNerable Fark Master Flex

    There is never a reason to write a paper longer than the piece it is dedicated to. Especially a paper that is 14x longer than the piece it is dedicated to.
     
  19. possumslayer

    possumslayer Roadkill Guru

    one I learned in Marion ,VA.
    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    I'm schizophrenic
    And so am I
     
    Last edited: Dec 14, 2012
  20. PoochPunt3rdDown

    PoochPunt3rdDown Troll Guru

    Can we go on down, downtown,
    In that I want to see,
    To the down Downtown,
    With that I might agree,

    With the down, downtown sound of my soul,
    With the down, downtown sound so droll.

    Paradigm of statues,
    Virgins we will undo,
    Angry at myself,
    Angry what I could do.

    Resigned to my faults,
    Faults are in the Earth,
    I think they cause earthquakes.



    -pooch​
     

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